Tight!
You get the point across very nicely.
I remember writing a short story back when I was in 5th grade (1992) that took place in the year 2010 and it starts off by saying "..the future is a troubling time. Children are killing themselves on the playground..." and well, I never expected it to actually happen, but it has.
Sure we have all wished someone we went to school with was dead. Some even thought about how it would happen. Like when I got in trouble and had to go to the office. I kept wishing the light on the ceiling would fall of and hit the vice principal in the head or something. Some people even threatened other people, but no one ever carried through with there threats. You know why, because we had parents people. Parents that told us, "don't do what t.v. Tells you to do, do what WE tell you to do". But you can't blame it all on the parents. Kids today are stupid. They have no empathy for others. Hell many people don't even know what empathy means. Empathy is where you picture yourself in another persons position. How would you feal if you were them. Well......there it is.